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Hi, I've just completed the "Marking up letter" assessment and
would like someone to send feedback. Thanks
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Dr. Eleanor Gaye
Awesome Science faculty
University of Awesome
Bobtown, CA 99999,
USA
Tel: 123-456-7890
Email: no_reply@example.com
20 January 2016
Miss Eileen Dover
4321 Cliff Top Edge
Dover, CT9 XXX
UK
Re: Eileen Dover university application
Dear Eileen,
Thank you for your recent application to join us at the
University of Awesome’s science faculty to study as part of your
PhD next year. I will
answer your questions one by one, in the following
sections.
Starting dates
We are happy to accomodate you starting your study with us at
any time, however it would suit us better if you could start at the
beginning of a semester; the start dates for each one are as
follows:
First semester: 9 September 2016
Second semester: 15 January 2017
Third semester: 2 May 2017
Please let me know if this is ok, and if so which start date you
would prefer.
You can find more information about important university dates
on our
website.
Subjects of study
At the Awesome Science Faculty, we have a pretty open-minded
research facility — as long as the subjects fall somewhere in the
realm of science and technology. You seem like an intelligent,
dedicated researcher, and just the kind of person we'd like to have
on our team. Saying that, of the ideas you submitted we were most
intrigued by are as follows, in order of priority:
Turning H2O into wine, and the health benefits of
Resveratrol (C14H12O3.)
Measuring the effect on performance of funk bassplayers at
tempratures exceeding 30° C (86° F), when the audience size
exponentially increases (effect of 3 × 103 > 3 × 104.)
HTML and
CSS constructs for
representing musical scores.
So please can you provide more information on each of these
subjects, including how long you'd expect the research to take,
required staff and other resources, and anything else you think
we'd need to know?
Thanks.
Exotic dance moves
Yes, you are right!
As part of my post-doctorate work, I did study exotic tribal
dances.
To answer your question, my favourite dances are as follows, with
definitions:
Polynesian chicken dance
A little known but very influential dance dating back as far as
300BC, a whole village would dance around in a circle like
chickens, to encourage their livestock or be
"fruitful".
Icelandic brownian shuffle
Before the Icelanders developed fire as a means of getting
warm, they used to practice this dance, which involved huddling
close together in a circle on the floor, and shuffling their bodies
around in imperceptably tiny, very rapid movements. One of my
fellow students used to say that he thought this dance inspired
modern styles such as Twerking.
Arctic robot dance
An interesting example of historic misinformation, English
explorers in the 1960s believed to have discovered a new dance
style characterised by "robotic", stilted movements, being
practiced by inhabitants of Northern Alaska and Canada. Later on
however it was discovered that they were just moving like this
because they were really cold.
For more of my research, see my exotic dance research page.
Yours sincerely,
Dr Eleanor Gaye
University of Awesome motto: Be awesome to each
other -- Bill S Preston, Esq.
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This doesn’t look too bad to me. I’ve noticed a couple of bits
immediately:
The top address and date need to be over on the right hand side.
To achieve this, you need to give the wrapping paragraphs
class=“receiver-column”
You are missing some <sup> elements in the bit “effect of
3 × 103 > 3 × 104”
You can check your markup in more detail against our finished
version:
https://mdn.github.io/learning-area/html/introduction-to-html/marking-up-a-letter-finished/
Also see the marking guide at
github.com
mdn/learning-area/blob/master/html/introduction-to-html/marking-up-a-letter-finished/marking-guide.md
# Marking guide for "Marking up a letter"
The following guide outlines a marking guide for the MDN Learning Area HTML Topic — [Marking up a letter](https://developer.mozilla.org/en-US/Learn/HTML/Introduction_to_HTML/Marking_up_a_letter). Each subtask detailed in the assessment is listed below, along with an explanation of how many marks the task is worth, and the mark breakdown.
Note: These are guidelines, not set in stone rules — you are of course free to use your judgement on mark awarding when you meet an edge case, or somethign that isn't clearly cut.
The overall mark awarded is out of 47. Work out their final mark, and then divide by 47 and multiply by 100 to give a percentage mark. For reference, you can find a [finished marked up letter](index.html) that would be awarded top marks.
## Block/structural semantics
<dl>
<dt>You should structure the overall document with an appropriate structure including doctype, and <html>, <head> and <body> elements (5 marks)</dt>
<dd>They need to:
<ul>
<li>Provide an HTML5 doctype (<!doctype html>, 1 mark)</li>
<li>Include a <head> element just below that (1 mark)</li>
<li>Wrap the content in a <body> element (1 mark)</li>
<li>Wrap head and body in an <html> element (1 mark)</li>
<li>You get one bonus mark for including a lang attribute in the <html> tag (1 mark)</li>
</ul>
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